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Three of us in the tunnel
Twenty feet wide, easily
We're still keeping left

The sky's really blue here
Not one single cloud
And yet there are puddles

Half the streetlights are out
They alternate - on then off
Maybe the yobs like patterns

Songbirds don't always sing
They like staring, too
Like somebody pressed mute

The pavement's boring
Look away from it for once
Might see something nice
©2009 ~alexi-greer
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:iconhiempsal:
I don't know who Howard Springs is, but apparently he makes you write awesome poetry. :) I like it, it's different, and it makes me find meanings that you probably didn't intend. So yeah, really cool :D

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"To think of these stars that you see overhead at night, these vast worlds which we can never reach. I would annex the planets if I could; I often think of that. It makes me sad to see them so clear and yet so far."
:iconalexi-greer:
He wrote Fame is the Spur. You should read it, it's amazingly awesome.
I'm glad you like it, I think some vaguely interesting things while I'm walking around London.
:D

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Beautiful as Aphrodite, wise as Athena, swifter than Mercury, and stronger than Hercules.
:iconhiempsal:
Amazingly awesome? Wow. Maybe I will, I'll add it to the list of books to read :D

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"To think of these stars that you see overhead at night, these vast worlds which we can never reach. I would annex the planets if I could; I often think of that. It makes me sad to see them so clear and yet so far."
:iconalexi-greer:
Yeah, it really is. My highest recommendations.
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Beautiful as Aphrodite, wise as Athena, swifter than Mercury, and stronger than Hercules.

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